I Like It. The Words You Use Are Mostly Fitting Aprat From A Couple Of Lines.
I Didnt Like Where You Were Going In Lines 5, 7 To 10 And 12. Line 14 Is So So.
Your Switch To Unapologetic Complexity Is Too Quick; Considering Your Calming Start.
Some Comparisons Were Way Too Direct And As Such Ironically Did Not Convey A Clear Image Of What You Were Talking About (Bongo And Moon Mission Lines For Example).
Good Stuff Overall. Uh (Is There A Scoring System On This?) 7/10.
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Originally Posted by Student
Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT
you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Originally Posted by Edgeworth
Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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