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**Babylon** · #2 10-26-2013, 01:57 PM

I dropped some feed on it, but I'll go in depth here. I feel that Pugz bars were basic rhyme wise, he rode the beat very well but it was 1 to 2 syllable bars the entire verse, which just comes off as basic. And some things didn't rhyme at all, like firetruck/coroner. So based on vibe and cadence you did very well but basing off of lyrical substance I personally didn't like it. On the other hand Ego had complex schemes, intricate flows and just a dope ass verse the lyrical content was very nice. No hate, nice track all in all one brought a nice cadence and smooth ass style and the other brought some dope ass lyrics and sick flows. Honestly I think the fact I'd never expect y'alls two styles clashing on a track is what made it for me, a pretty dope mash up. Good shit @Pugz and @Egotistik

**Babylon** · 10-26-2013, 01:57 PM

I dropped some feed on it, but I'll go in depth here. I feel that Pugz bars were basic rhyme wise, he rode the beat very well but it was 1 to 2 syllable bars the entire verse, which just comes off as basic. And some things didn't rhyme at all, like firetruck/coroner. So based on vibe and cadence you did very well but basing off of lyrical substance I personally didn't like it. On the other hand Ego had complex schemes, intricate flows and just a dope ass verse the lyrical content was very nice. No hate, nice track all in all one brought a nice cadence and smooth ass style and the other brought some dope ass lyrics and sick flows. Honestly I think the fact I'd never expect y'alls two styles clashing on a track is what made it for me, a pretty dope mash up. Good shit @Pugz and @Egotistik

10-26-2013, 01:57 PM	#2
Babylon Ranked Audio Record 63 Won / 15 Lost Ranked Text Record 66 Won / 21 Lost Exclusive Text Record 2 Won / 0 Lost Join Date: Jun 2012 Voted: 289 audio / 238 text Posts: 4,132 Mentioned: 1428 Post(s) Tagged: 40 Thread(s)	I dropped some feed on it, but I'll go in depth here. I feel that Pugz bars were basic rhyme wise, he rode the beat very well but it was 1 to 2 syllable bars the entire verse, which just comes off as basic. And some things didn't rhyme at all, like firetruck/coroner. So based on vibe and cadence you did very well but basing off of lyrical substance I personally didn't like it. On the other hand Ego had complex schemes, intricate flows and just a dope ass verse the lyrical content was very nice. No hate, nice track all in all one brought a nice cadence and smooth ass style and the other brought some dope ass lyrics and sick flows. Honestly I think the fact I'd never expect y'alls two styles clashing on a track is what made it for me, a pretty dope mash up. Good shit @Pugz and @Egotistik
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