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Originally Posted by RULE
Nice track, good to hear a nice long song with just BARS.
Still got a kinda major issue with your delivery. You slur words alot and your diction is very bad at time. Basically i found it hard to make out what you were saying most of the time.
That main issue aside (it is quite a bit issue tho) i thought otherwise the track was solid man. The quality was good, the delivery (tone-wise) was good too, and the bars i could make out had some sting in them. The poor diction REALLY affected the impact tho. Big time.
Holla!
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this....
very good potential though man...just tighten it up a lil