I gotta cosign some of Jam's thoughts about Harizon's vocab. He used good vocabulary but in a matter that had me really disjointed from any story and I found myself unable to connect with the verse as a whole.
Lockheart left some things to be desired in the vocab and style but told a story that I could follow and connect with in some way and at the end of the verse I felt more satisfaction for reading it than I did with Harizon's, therefore...
Lockheart gets my vote
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