I read the whole post. Very well done, I enjoyed all of them except for the 2nd last paragragh, with the final apparition. It seems out of place, maybe in need of more description. And i think you could've hit harder with the ending paragraph.
I noticed a few slip ups in the rhyme schemes...
1) Mother nature evolved into another STATURE
Darwin disagreed, destiny designed her brother's maker
-STATURE is pronounced with a soft 'a' ... rhymes with 'matter'
-you used it to rhyme with a hard 'a', messes the flow up a bit
2) The numbers are ballads, that all point to PRESTIGIOUS
All I need is your name to appoint flowing RICHES
-seemed very out of place, hurt the flow.
Other than that it seemed fine. Worth the read, lots of intense imagery. The whole demon section was amazing.
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