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Unread 08-09-2013, 10:50 PM
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How does that rhyme?
Den and In. Alright that works.
Tist and A? Nope.
N and G? Hell no.
Thrill and Drill rhyme though.
1/2 the syllables rhyme. Good work.
Like say Inner-G and Dentist n.. Nowhere close to working.

INNA not INNER but its All good...You honestly shoulda took notice that I commented sayin I keystyled it...I mean if you read it wit quick flow its not as ez noticed but I do appreciate the break-down but you being in your position should know it was a keystyle and was no need to break it down like that ya digs? All it took was a comment saying for Ex... "Flow shouldnt have keystyled it-Didnt work out"....feel me? Iono...Is all good though its still my fault in the end for not taking time out to actually type up a verse....i dont mind the criticism even though I dont need it...But like I said Im just Bs'n til tourney time...
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Black Book View Post
How does that rhyme?
Den and In. Alright that works.
Tist and A? Nope.
N and G? Hell no.
Thrill and Drill rhyme though.
1/2 the syllables rhyme. Good work.
Like say Inner-G and Dentist n.. Nowhere close to working.

INNA not INNER but its All good...You honestly shoulda took notice that I commented sayin I keystyled it...I mean if you read it wit quick flow its not as ez noticed but I do appreciate the break-down but you being in your position should know it was a keystyle and was no need to break it down like that ya digs? All it took was a comment saying for Ex... "Flow shouldnt have keystyled it-Didnt work out"....feel me? Iono...Is all good though its still my fault in the end for not taking time out to actually type up a verse....i dont mind the criticism even though I dont need it...But like I said Im just Bs'n til tourney time...
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