Originally Posted by Godbody

Make no attempts myself? I dont even fuck with the text battlin like that

But I didn't forget how to text battle. & That bar from @JimmyDean was horrendous. The beginning was dope, I saw where it was going and initially the rhyme scheme was on point

But how are you going to host a "rap school" and give someone bar of the week when they're not even rhyming. If this is really a "rap school" and Moses is really trying to help people elevate, then he should have brought it to Jimmy's attention immediately that the last rhyme was forced up the fuckin ass

I'd take a bar that executes the assignment half-assedly if it rhymes and reads fluidly over that JimmyDean bar

So your first reply to my comment was a lie, you're making no attempt to help. Therefore you really have no grounds to criticize someone that is. Rather than being so critical of others why don't you form your own school, if your advice is that superior I'm sure you will do just fine.

Originally Posted by Godbody

Make no attempts myself? I dont even fuck with the text battlin like that

But I didn't forget how to text battle. & That bar from @JimmyDean was horrendous. The beginning was dope, I saw where it was going and initially the rhyme scheme was on point

But how are you going to host a "rap school" and give someone bar of the week when they're not even rhyming. If this is really a "rap school" and Moses is really trying to help people elevate, then he should have brought it to Jimmy's attention immediately that the last rhyme was forced up the fuckin ass

I'd take a bar that executes the assignment half-assedly if it rhymes and reads fluidly over that JimmyDean bar

So your first reply to my comment was a lie, you're making no attempt to help. Therefore you really have no grounds to criticize someone that is. Rather than being so critical of others why don't you form your own school, if your advice is that superior I'm sure you will do just fine.