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**Apollyon** · #6 06-27-2013, 09:57 AM

Writer 8 - you were a bit boring and i felt you could of shown a lot more lyricism within your verse.. I wasnt really feeling the story as well, it should of had a few twist to it or something more then just weed..

Writer 9 - I'm not much of a topical person but i had somewhat of the same idea as you writer 9.. My would have been strictly porn though.. I felt your stroy telling was good and the flow to your verse was nice and your multies helped with your verse a lot..

Vote: Writer 9

**Apollyon** · 06-27-2013, 09:57 AM

Writer 8 - you were a bit boring and i felt you could of shown a lot more lyricism within your verse.. I wasnt really feeling the story as well, it should of had a few twist to it or something more then just weed..

Writer 9 - I'm not much of a topical person but i had somewhat of the same idea as you writer 9.. My would have been strictly porn though.. I felt your stroy telling was good and the flow to your verse was nice and your multies helped with your verse a lot..

Vote: Writer 9

06-27-2013, 09:57 AM	#6
Apollyon <Turnbull AC's> Ranked Text Record 311 Won / 86 Lost Exclusive Text Record 6 Won / 2 Lost Join Date: Jul 2011 Voted: 90 audio / 1323 text Posts: 2,813 Mentioned: 1141 Post(s) Tagged: 56 Thread(s)	Writer 8 - you were a bit boring and i felt you could of shown a lot more lyricism within your verse.. I wasnt really feeling the story as well, it should of had a few twist to it or something more then just weed.. Writer 9 - I'm not much of a topical person but i had somewhat of the same idea as you writer 9.. My would have been strictly porn though.. I felt your stroy telling was good and the flow to your verse was nice and your multies helped with your verse a lot.. Vote: Writer 9
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