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I read the first two stanzas and they were pretty nice. Good imagery and flow. The rhyme scheme was pretty tight. I'll come back and read more later.
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I read the first two stanzas and they were pretty nice. Good imagery and flow. The rhyme scheme was pretty tight. I'll come back and read more later.
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