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Unread 02-10-2013, 02:23 PM
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Default Need a couple opinions on my first verse..

Seems like my chat on here never works; Either nobody is ever online or it just doesn't show them to be online.

Anyway.. My homie n me were just fuckin' around recording some bars over 'Rack City' Instr. and I got the first verse done (and the hook but haven't mixed it yet) - A couple people I know have peeped it and said it was dope but I need some opinions from people who actually make music.

It's on soundcloud so if someone can give it a listen n tell me what you think i'd appreciate it, kinda rusty since I ain't done shit for over a year lol

https://soundcloud.com/search?q=burny%20first%20verse

By the way don't mind the name of the track.. My homie insists on calling me Burny for some reason haha.. Got that old ass grandma nickname n shit.

---------- Post added at 07:23 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:21 PM ----------

EDIT: Oh and I understand my voice might be abit too loud, Im'a fix that soon.
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Default Need a couple opinions on my first verse..

Seems like my chat on here never works; Either nobody is ever online or it just doesn't show them to be online.

Anyway.. My homie n me were just fuckin' around recording some bars over 'Rack City' Instr. and I got the first verse done (and the hook but haven't mixed it yet) - A couple people I know have peeped it and said it was dope but I need some opinions from people who actually make music.

It's on soundcloud so if someone can give it a listen n tell me what you think i'd appreciate it, kinda rusty since I ain't done shit for over a year lol

https://soundcloud.com/search?q=burny%20first%20verse

By the way don't mind the name of the track.. My homie insists on calling me Burny for some reason haha.. Got that old ass grandma nickname n shit.

---------- Post added at 07:23 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:21 PM ----------

EDIT: Oh and I understand my voice might be abit too loud, Im'a fix that soon.
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