Listenin.. Like in the intro...
Flow is on point... Lyrics are good... Delivery is there at points, but could use a little more work on emphasis on some of the rhymes, but I could tell that some of the lack of emphasis was due to no breathe at some points, so don't forget to breathe at regular intervals.
Second verse
Flow is completely on point. Punches are good, multis are good and worked for the verse... Was feeling this verse big time.
Overall I'd give a 7/10... Good drop.
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