kinda touchy considering its a dedication. your hearts in the right place so respect for that but i gotta be honest and say you didnt do a good job. you shoulda wrote and put some real thought into it. on the plus side you got rid of that retarded fake deep voice youve used for years.
learn to stay on topic and how to properly structure your verses around a beat. lost count how many times you were off beat.
props for trying though.
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Originally Posted by Godbody
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Fuck off, I got work to do.
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