[RakishHeir]

please critque my lyrics before I record them tomorrow, I appreciate any advice or wisdom dropped.

peace n' love see ya when the sun been risen for a few hours

life, is not worth wasting
I mean face it, you might only live one time
and I don't really know if that's true
but when you find out it might be too late for you
so use some common knowledge when debating
you gotta make moves man, can't rely on fate
can't rely on anyone that's all I'm saying
I've waited my whole life n' never been saved
I've been patiently pacing, taking hits, same shit
different day but I realized it's what I make it
...and sometimes it's kinda hard to take in
but worst comes go to school n' build yourself a space ship

take off, and you ain't ever gotta land
fuck the promised land man fate is in your hands
follow your dreams life ain't always what it seems
cause reality's what you make it even if you don't believe
it's in you! you can see it when you're sleeping
I love the gentle lullabies that chase me as I'm leaving
I don't wanna stay forever 'cause some day I gotta go
even if I never want to life has got it in it's flow

death, it's just something we created
many people hate it but someday they'll be related
so embrace it, I mean it's probably what you make it
just like life is, but a different stage to take in
I know you're probably sad when you see a loved one go
but you gotta understand the finale to their show
if we were never meant to go then we wouldn't have to go
so if you live forever I'm really sorry for your soul..
I mean everybody questions what happens when they die
then they die n' understand it like they knew it the whole time
and of course I'm gonna cry 'cause your presences what I loved
and I miss you like I should but I'll see you when I come

take off, and you ain't ever gotta land
fuck the promised land man fate is in your hands
follow your dreams life ain't always what it seems
cause it's really what you make it even if you don't believe
it's in you! you can see it when you're sleeping
I love the gentle lullabies that chase me as I'm leaving
I don't wanna stay forever 'cause some day I gotta go
even if I never want to life has got it in it's flow

life, am I back to you again?
where are all my friends, was I ever even dead?
now I'm back to questioning every single thing I hear
still waiting for the day that I'm a king n' life is fair

[RakishHeir]

please critque my lyrics before I record them tomorrow, I appreciate any advice or wisdom dropped.

peace n' love see ya when the sun been risen for a few hours

life, is not worth wasting
I mean face it, you might only live one time
and I don't really know if that's true
but when you find out it might be too late for you
so use some common knowledge when debating
you gotta make moves man, can't rely on fate
can't rely on anyone that's all I'm saying
I've waited my whole life n' never been saved
I've been patiently pacing, taking hits, same shit
different day but I realized it's what I make it
...and sometimes it's kinda hard to take in
but worst comes go to school n' build yourself a space ship

take off, and you ain't ever gotta land
fuck the promised land man fate is in your hands
follow your dreams life ain't always what it seems
cause reality's what you make it even if you don't believe
it's in you! you can see it when you're sleeping
I love the gentle lullabies that chase me as I'm leaving
I don't wanna stay forever 'cause some day I gotta go
even if I never want to life has got it in it's flow

death, it's just something we created
many people hate it but someday they'll be related
so embrace it, I mean it's probably what you make it
just like life is, but a different stage to take in
I know you're probably sad when you see a loved one go
but you gotta understand the finale to their show
if we were never meant to go then we wouldn't have to go
so if you live forever I'm really sorry for your soul..
I mean everybody questions what happens when they die
then they die n' understand it like they knew it the whole time
and of course I'm gonna cry 'cause your presences what I loved
and I miss you like I should but I'll see you when I come

take off, and you ain't ever gotta land
fuck the promised land man fate is in your hands
follow your dreams life ain't always what it seems
cause it's really what you make it even if you don't believe
it's in you! you can see it when you're sleeping
I love the gentle lullabies that chase me as I'm leaving
I don't wanna stay forever 'cause some day I gotta go
even if I never want to life has got it in it's flow

life, am I back to you again?
where are all my friends, was I ever even dead?
now I'm back to questioning every single thing I hear
still waiting for the day that I'm a king n' life is fair