The mix is rough but clean. work on how you end your verses to up that cadence. that was really the only stand out flaw minus a few niggles. 3rd verse sounded way louder than the previous 2. i liked the "so what do i DO" part the way you worked the sample. you really went in. especially for your first song . it wasn't perfect but that's nit picking considering. get your mixing right and you'll be laughing. you got a dope voice and flow. the writing is cool to.
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