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01-14-2013, 02:14 PM
RakishHeir
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I think you should mix the vocals up a little bit more, the beat over powers them a little
the flow sounds good but you can def improve it practice makes perfect though I def enjoy the track, just hard to focus on it.
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I think you should mix the vocals up a little bit more, the beat over powers them a little
the flow sounds good but you can def improve it practice makes perfect though I def enjoy the track, just hard to focus on it.
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