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Originally Posted by Phroxen
Sure, I'll humor you.
You're trying to make references to freight moving.. (Boat Loads, A Freight, Bootlegging). But, the setups are horrible. They're actually nonexistent. You've got boat loads on deck? Of what?? Cold soles in cracks.. you've got cold feet?? That leave him a freight.. literal translation: you'll either turn him into or give him freight.. (note: a freight does not sound like afraid. Those holes on backs is broken english and sounds retarded. Boot, Legging besides the homophonic tie to "bootlegging" adds nothing to the bar. Then you said when I go holding back.. more broken english because again, that doesn't make sense. You can either hold back or not hold back.. there is no such thing as go holding back. Then you say I'll pop cat that'll get top wrapped.. pop cat? Another floating fragment. Get top wrapped? Again.. not only a weird fragment, but wtf is getting top wrapped? Also, snow globes have nothing to do with your entire bar besides fitting into a rhyme scheme, which is called forcing multis.
TLDR; Less broken english, More creative ideas.
Oh, & @Unyque LMMFAOOOOOOOOOOO. That clip is fucking brilliant.
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-____- Seriously Phroxen? Seriously?
First You Attempt To Explain My Concept Then You Ask Me What Concept Is Behind My Verse That You JUST Explained... You Are A Moron.
And A Freight Does Sound Like Afraid.
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Originally Posted by Jason
Phroxen is a voting guru man straight up.. this guy is on point as fuck
upped your VP and told someone to give you an FVC title
one of the only guys who really deserve it
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Ah Jason.