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Unread 11-26-2012, 03:53 PM
SH1T L0RD
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shit was unique as far as lyric writing goes and your presence is on point (maybe cause this shit feels more like a parking lot cypher, which you've probably been in countless of) but like everyone else is sayin definitely not crowd pleaser material. i couldn't really hear your rhymes either, a lot of sub-rhymes and what not but that takes away from the effectiveness of a real nice/catchable punchline.

cool first battle

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lol @ you drinking one of those expensive rectangular water bottles
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Unread 11-26-2012, 03:53 PM   #35
 
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shit was unique as far as lyric writing goes and your presence is on point (maybe cause this shit feels more like a parking lot cypher, which you've probably been in countless of) but like everyone else is sayin definitely not crowd pleaser material. i couldn't really hear your rhymes either, a lot of sub-rhymes and what not but that takes away from the effectiveness of a real nice/catchable punchline.

cool first battle

---------- Post added at 12:53 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:50 PM ----------

lol @ you drinking one of those expensive rectangular water bottles
 
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