ROUND 1
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Inception vs @
MadVerbs
Battle:
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=447006
Inception Voted:
Sketchy Individual: 3 / Etcetera: 2
MadVerbs Voted:
Sketchy Individual: 3 / Etcetera: 2
Inception, most of what you wrote was simply copying and pasting the texters' bars. You do not have to do this in order to give a full breakdown. You could have simply referred to the lines without copying them verbatim. It made your expos bloated and beyond that, there wasn't much of an expo. MadVerbs offered a more thought-out and robust expo in this match.
Vote: MadVerbs
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ROUND 1
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Ray BaRz™ vs @
Zoophagus Zedikiah
Ray BaRz™ Voted:
W33Dman: 4 / WaDe JaYare: 4
Zoophagus Zedikiah Voted: W33Dman: 3 /
WaDe JaYare: 5
Ray BaRz, I felt you picked the wrong winner in that match-up. I also felt you could have went into more detail in your expo. For example, you told W33Dman to 'clean up' his rhyme schemes and multis, and you told Wade that a lot of his shit was hard to understand. You could have explained 'cleaning up' multies or used clearer language to say what you were trying to say. It also would have been nice if you had given an example to W33Dman which part of his verse was difficult to understand, because I'm almost willing to bet neither one of these guys totally understood what you meant.
Zoo, I liked the expos that you gave both emcees, but I felt you should have kept it more even in terms of how many sentences you spend addressing each battler. Your expo for W33Dman was very brief compared to your expo for Wade. I felt Zoo cast the better vote in this match-up.
Vote: Zoophagus Zedikiah