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Originally Posted by FreezyCT
ok to be real, you rely TOO heavily on pauses...it shows you cant count syllables to save your life - your whole first verse is basically a stretched syllable...everytime you say faggot, i cringe - its like youre trying extra hard to pronounce every letter...and your structure is terrible...AAABBB...who does that scheme?...ill give you a point for originality
but then the hook comes in at im forced to take that point back, bc the hook is terrible...honestly...no originality, no harmony, too much going on
all you talk about is sucking dick and faggots...again, no originality
and before you even say anything about me hating - you tried to get away with text verse/hand purse/facts first as a rhyme scheme....../thread
---------- Post added at 03:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:34 PM ----------
you suck
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Gimme tha strap, and use tha side door to leave...
U were never here, brah. I got u.