ok...well i finally got a chance to peep this...quality is obviously an issue and something i struggle with alot too...
this beat is nice yo i fucks with that..the delivery was decent, you'll do better by giving a little more of yourself to the track fam...lyrics were good but the 'make you nod ya head' factor only happens when you sell the listener on it..in other words..if YOU feel it and rock out to it...WE will...you have a helluva alot of potential 'Rupt...if not only because you text very well and got an ear for good instrumentals...
now stop bullshitting and rip shit up lol...
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