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Unread 08-09-2012, 02:32 PM
RhetoriK
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Path vs Unyqe

Both had some valid points. From the voting perspective here are some thoughts:

Path -

I understand your frustrations. I liked and agreed with your analysis on Pistons, but honestly half of that shit is for the PM's get to the point in a vote. Imo a vote shouldn't take more than a single comment. Lyri's side was less accurate. i think it's mainly because you put a lot of emphasis on capping rhymes, when the real issue is picking content that schemes better. whether it's capped or not, it still has to rhyme. i think that was the basic point you were getting at so it's all good. now, with all that said. you really struggled to keep shit concealed with such a long winded breakdown. by the time i finished reading the first one, i already got the idea that you're telling kid "good try" .work on keeping shit concise and discreet. keep it 100 but like i mentioned. a lot of that stuff can be hashed out in a PM or something.

Unyqe

you were on point as a whole, but how about not insulting someones intellegence in the opening line of an expo lmao... 'i think you're basic, so i'll keep it simple (stupid)' priceless. nah, really keep objectivity in the comments and get to the point lol ok.. again, there's a capping obsession i don't fully get. neither of these dudes un-capping/capping ish would have helped their verse flow ANY better. shy away from that perspective. the comment about self-directed lines was solid that's def. a help to someone trying to elevate. you're not telling them how to win, you're giving a vote! keep that in mind " you the idea of punches and concepts, however they were not executed properly at all." <-neither was this part of your explanation. again you lost objectivity when you told son "he's better than that" ...keep shit on an even plane, you can PM him and tell him he's better in person. not a line for publicly viewed battles.

Overall... the votes suited the battle (Meh) both need to get to the point, be objective, and drop a vote. period. the rates were more accurate than the comments entailed though, so there's merit in that. keep building though.

Vote - Path gets my vote but not by much
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Unread 08-09-2012, 02:32 PM   #26
 
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32 Won / 13 Lost
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249 Won / 72 Lost
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Path vs Unyqe

Both had some valid points. From the voting perspective here are some thoughts:

Path -

I understand your frustrations. I liked and agreed with your analysis on Pistons, but honestly half of that shit is for the PM's get to the point in a vote. Imo a vote shouldn't take more than a single comment. Lyri's side was less accurate. i think it's mainly because you put a lot of emphasis on capping rhymes, when the real issue is picking content that schemes better. whether it's capped or not, it still has to rhyme. i think that was the basic point you were getting at so it's all good. now, with all that said. you really struggled to keep shit concealed with such a long winded breakdown. by the time i finished reading the first one, i already got the idea that you're telling kid "good try" .work on keeping shit concise and discreet. keep it 100 but like i mentioned. a lot of that stuff can be hashed out in a PM or something.

Unyqe

you were on point as a whole, but how about not insulting someones intellegence in the opening line of an expo lmao... 'i think you're basic, so i'll keep it simple (stupid)' priceless. nah, really keep objectivity in the comments and get to the point lol ok.. again, there's a capping obsession i don't fully get. neither of these dudes un-capping/capping ish would have helped their verse flow ANY better. shy away from that perspective. the comment about self-directed lines was solid that's def. a help to someone trying to elevate. you're not telling them how to win, you're giving a vote! keep that in mind " you the idea of punches and concepts, however they were not executed properly at all." <-neither was this part of your explanation. again you lost objectivity when you told son "he's better than that" ...keep shit on an even plane, you can PM him and tell him he's better in person. not a line for publicly viewed battles.

Overall... the votes suited the battle (Meh) both need to get to the point, be objective, and drop a vote. period. the rates were more accurate than the comments entailed though, so there's merit in that. keep building though.

Vote - Path gets my vote but not by much
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