[SoupErb]

Originally Posted by Dave

It's a nice enough track. Brilliant beat for the song. I think one thing this song could have used was sound effects. It's a funny style of song, so like when you said "I'm asleep in a loading bay" there could have maybe been beeping like a truck reversing or something. Felt that would have brought the whole comedic element together like an ealry Eminem kind of one.

It's weird that you said that coz I was actually gonna add some sound effects into it..Like passing traffic or something like that. Actually come to think of it, I don't know why I didn't lol

Thanks for the props though fam, much appreciated.

---------- Post added at 06:13 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:47 PM ----------

bumping. had to re-upload

[SoupErb]

Originally Posted by Dave

It's a nice enough track. Brilliant beat for the song. I think one thing this song could have used was sound effects. It's a funny style of song, so like when you said "I'm asleep in a loading bay" there could have maybe been beeping like a truck reversing or something. Felt that would have brought the whole comedic element together like an ealry Eminem kind of one.

It's weird that you said that coz I was actually gonna add some sound effects into it..Like passing traffic or something like that. Actually come to think of it, I don't know why I didn't lol

Thanks for the props though fam, much appreciated.

---------- Post added at 06:13 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:47 PM ----------

bumping. had to re-upload