Quick break down...
Siphon Filter: This was nice, but some parts of the voice filter wasn't rite, but deff liked the feel to this one.
Lets do that (Boom Bap): i liked this, need a bit more work on catching & maintaing the flow, but its a nice beat an your nearly there with it. (Personally, i'd re-do that one not for the sake of it was aiight, make it better, but rather cos its got the potential to be really nice)
Lung Technician: this was a great concept, Verses an Chorus... the whole thing etc etc... Mic levels between Verses' & the Chorus are very bad & mixed badly also... (This is another one i would re-do, its got potential)
Gladiator Snippet: Bad mic quality, same as others with a nice overall concept... just bad bad quality.
Rhetorik Spazzzz: You suited to beat here better... Lyric is was tight, presence was felt... real chilled with the mic.
Escapism: a good concept but your off beat/don't suit you... (personally the one i diss liek the most)
Murders Row: Lyric wise its tight, but your nearly there (like the lets do that boom bap one) with the flow... Just not catching the beat.
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