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**RhetoriK** · #8 05-30-2012, 10:12 AM

We could argue phonetics all day on that.
However Soup has a valid point. Iono, my lines are complex in nature most of the time, but I see a lot of cats that pull words out and it's not needed.
Unless it's relevant to the line and has a true double meaning to it. Leave it, LEAVE IT!!

So word @SoupErb

There's two types of wordplay. Mikey and i just talked about this a while ago.

Phrase wordplay (NawkOut, Rican, Grief, Book) and Single/Phonetic Wordplay (Mikey, Reef, Tank) I think people try to use both. Deciding what angle your taking is key. Sometimes its unavoidable, but still. Agreed.

'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!

Nah.

'Circle aint Crazy' ..they just some 'CENTRE MENTAL' BITCHES!!

probably how i would have done that. if they dont get it...

you already know. More of a single wordplay off a metaphor. but yeah seen.

**RhetoriK** · 05-30-2012, 10:12 AM

We could argue phonetics all day on that.
However Soup has a valid point. Iono, my lines are complex in nature most of the time, but I see a lot of cats that pull words out and it's not needed.
Unless it's relevant to the line and has a true double meaning to it. Leave it, LEAVE IT!!

So word @SoupErb

There's two types of wordplay. Mikey and i just talked about this a while ago.

Phrase wordplay (NawkOut, Rican, Grief, Book) and Single/Phonetic Wordplay (Mikey, Reef, Tank) I think people try to use both. Deciding what angle your taking is key. Sometimes its unavoidable, but still. Agreed.

'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!

Nah.

'Circle aint Crazy' ..they just some 'CENTRE MENTAL' BITCHES!!

probably how i would have done that. if they dont get it...

you already know. More of a single wordplay off a metaphor. but yeah seen.

05-30-2012, 10:12 AM	#8
RhetoriK <Dead Poets Society> Topical Champion Tag Team Champion Ranked Audio Record 32 Won / 13 Lost Ranked Text Record 249 Won / 72 Lost Exclusive Text Record 2 Won / 2 Lost Join Date: Apr 2006 Voted: 219 audio / 1257 text Posts: 5,258 Mentioned: 704 Post(s) Tagged: 47 Thread(s)	We could argue phonetics all day on that. However Soup has a valid point. Iono, my lines are complex in nature most of the time, but I see a lot of cats that pull words out and it's not needed. Unless it's relevant to the line and has a true double meaning to it. Leave it, LEAVE IT!! So word @SoupErb There's two types of wordplay. Mikey and i just talked about this a while ago. Phrase wordplay (NawkOut, Rican, Grief, Book) and Single/Phonetic Wordplay (Mikey, Reef, Tank) I think people try to use both. Deciding what angle your taking is key. Sometimes its unavoidable, but still. Agreed. 'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!! Nah. 'Circle aint Crazy' ..they just some 'CENTRE MENTAL' BITCHES!! probably how i would have done that. if they dont get it... you already know. More of a single wordplay off a metaphor. but yeah seen.
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