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Originally Posted by iQ™
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BEAT lol this beat was hype
PERFORMANCE man seems like everyone been rapping like this recently, ever since big sean and them. you went in on it and didn't sound like u were reading. definitely comfortable on the mic but something about your performance was unnatural to me. idunno if its cause you were just rapping like ovvverly swaggy or something and it came off like you were putting on a bit of a front... idunno i don't really like heavy party music though and thats kinda what this is. solid performance, something was a bit off. one thing i did like was the lil walk in you did at the beginning, 'i got this' lol like you just hopped in the booth from the boards
PRODUCTION great, really good... best yet in this thread. the guys voice at the start was muddy, but you came in and cut him off real quick so that worked
HOOK lamar already hit that 'hol up' hook heavy, but this was a decent party hook. nothin new though
LYRIC cool lyric, i wouldve felt a lil quick sylable flow switch up for a couple bars in there, that shit would bounce on this beat pretty dope. but nah your lyric was definitely cool, well written. one thing i don't feel is the 'swag swag' shit anymore though, leave that for the goonies in the bay
OVERALL this is a party song for sure. BUT thing is, the hook and the rap style all been done my man. The beat could definitely be slaughtered for a party track, but if u really wanna make a party song thats gunna go hard outside of your friend group you gotta think of some shit that nobodies put on track, and make that the hook. in my opinion, party music is all about starting a new fad. thats what people like, if thats what your into. so the reason the song didn't really work is cause your not really doin anything new.. think of some shit your friends do or say thats funny or catchy. i give it a 6, has potential