[AfterThought]

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God

no hate, im not saying im infalible. but this is my play house, and you asked for my opinion

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btw my president is not good amateur music. there is no bell curve. im rating according to music i like to listen to

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BEAT not ur beat, dope beat though sounds kinda premier'ish. only problem with using a beat like this is it give u a huge crutch, since you could just chill and let this shit breath whenever and the song will be cool

PERFORMANCE you sang the hook, you put your personality into your verse. no complaints i enjoyed your performance

PRODUCTION sounds like theres no production advice i can give to really help you out, you just have shitty equipment. it makes your vocals tinny. shit sounds like its being played out of a clock radio. but for some reason, i didn't mind it all that much on this song. also that dude talkin in the beginning makes your vocal sound 1000x worse when you start singing in comparison lol. but like i said, i actually don't mind it so much for this particular song.

HOOK your best part of this whole song. you sang it cool n all but the melody and lyric you wrote (im assuming you wrote it)... thats an awesome hook. if you gave that to some sexy ass female vocalist and had her sing that shit. oooo. you should hold on to that hook no lie.

LYRIC 1 verse!!??? come on man... thats a sin for a song with this much potential. but also, your singing this hook about howve you've sinned over and over again to be on top, your praying to the lord to forgive you. its a powerful hook. then you come in on the verse with brag rap. it cheapens the song man if you came in on that verse and spilt ur guts and sins that would be an awesome song. i could see jay z absolutely murdering this song if this were his beat, and he had some soul singer hit that hook.... you should sell it to jay

OVERALL honestly so much potential in this song. i loved that you sang the hook, that shit was refreshing. this song was original in this letsbeef community, and probably my favorite song iv heard so far. but i have to give you a 7. you only put in 1 verse and that 1 verse didn't contribute to the power of the song.

Really appreciate the break down Huey! I might re-record that track & add a verse.

[AfterThought]

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God

no hate, im not saying im infalible. but this is my play house, and you asked for my opinion

---------- Post added at 08:37 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:36 AM ----------

btw my president is not good amateur music. there is no bell curve. im rating according to music i like to listen to

---------- Post added at 08:54 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:37 AM ----------



BEAT not ur beat, dope beat though sounds kinda premier'ish. only problem with using a beat like this is it give u a huge crutch, since you could just chill and let this shit breath whenever and the song will be cool

PERFORMANCE you sang the hook, you put your personality into your verse. no complaints i enjoyed your performance

PRODUCTION sounds like theres no production advice i can give to really help you out, you just have shitty equipment. it makes your vocals tinny. shit sounds like its being played out of a clock radio. but for some reason, i didn't mind it all that much on this song. also that dude talkin in the beginning makes your vocal sound 1000x worse when you start singing in comparison lol. but like i said, i actually don't mind it so much for this particular song.

HOOK your best part of this whole song. you sang it cool n all but the melody and lyric you wrote (im assuming you wrote it)... thats an awesome hook. if you gave that to some sexy ass female vocalist and had her sing that shit. oooo. you should hold on to that hook no lie.

LYRIC 1 verse!!??? come on man... thats a sin for a song with this much potential. but also, your singing this hook about howve you've sinned over and over again to be on top, your praying to the lord to forgive you. its a powerful hook. then you come in on the verse with brag rap. it cheapens the song man if you came in on that verse and spilt ur guts and sins that would be an awesome song. i could see jay z absolutely murdering this song if this were his beat, and he had some soul singer hit that hook.... you should sell it to jay

OVERALL honestly so much potential in this song. i loved that you sang the hook, that shit was refreshing. this song was original in this letsbeef community, and probably my favorite song iv heard so far. but i have to give you a 7. you only put in 1 verse and that 1 verse didn't contribute to the power of the song.

Really appreciate the break down Huey! I might re-record that track & add a verse.