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Unread 05-11-2012, 11:51 AM
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*I cant peep the SoundCloud tracks so I wont officially vote yet, but..*

Swavy - your track was nothing different from your other tracks and features...which is kind of the problem with LB - no diversity...dont get me wrong, your track is dope is jsut nothing new...not enough personals - too generic for me...to each his own

Just C - you did exactly what was asked...you humiliated your opponent to the point he started a comment war...thats how you hit home...you were creative with the Benson feature - youll deny it, but it looks like you put some time into this...dont be ashamed of that, it shows and youll probably win because of it...not going to lie, there were parts where your accent was too strong for me to understand, but the good far out-shined the bad

Dono - another very creative submission...the track skills are definitely present, but there are some flaws that will keep this from winning...with that said, you cant hate on this track...Dono has stepped his game up tenfold and went very personal with this track...one of the better songs so far

Blocc - not a fan of your sound...probably wasnt a good idea to go accapella, but it is what it is...bc you went accapella, your lyrics really needed to stand out...the lyrics are good man, but there are too many lyricists on here thatll overshadow hat you just did...you need to incorporate some flow or another element to your sound thatll make you stand out...its a work in progress, but youre getting there..keep it up

Benson - lol i like the intro, very creative...some technical flaws here thatll hold the track back in the voting, but this is still a good diss...you went personal and chewed him up...but yo, the dubs are kiilling me lol - they need turned down...i wouldve liked to hear more but you did your job

TRE - are you the same person rapping who opened the track? if you are, what happened...no offense but the quality fell off the table...you have two different vocal tracks going at once and its ruining the experience...second listen...swavys track comes to mind when im listening....good lines and concepts, but its too generic...you have flow and presence, youre just killing yourself with that quality/experimentation



with that said, my official vote wont come until i am able to finish listening...in the mean time, Just C is in the top spot...take it for what its worth
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Unread 05-11-2012, 11:51 AM   #127
 
FreezyCT
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Join Date: Jun 2009
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*I cant peep the SoundCloud tracks so I wont officially vote yet, but..*

Swavy - your track was nothing different from your other tracks and features...which is kind of the problem with LB - no diversity...dont get me wrong, your track is dope is jsut nothing new...not enough personals - too generic for me...to each his own

Just C - you did exactly what was asked...you humiliated your opponent to the point he started a comment war...thats how you hit home...you were creative with the Benson feature - youll deny it, but it looks like you put some time into this...dont be ashamed of that, it shows and youll probably win because of it...not going to lie, there were parts where your accent was too strong for me to understand, but the good far out-shined the bad

Dono - another very creative submission...the track skills are definitely present, but there are some flaws that will keep this from winning...with that said, you cant hate on this track...Dono has stepped his game up tenfold and went very personal with this track...one of the better songs so far

Blocc - not a fan of your sound...probably wasnt a good idea to go accapella, but it is what it is...bc you went accapella, your lyrics really needed to stand out...the lyrics are good man, but there are too many lyricists on here thatll overshadow hat you just did...you need to incorporate some flow or another element to your sound thatll make you stand out...its a work in progress, but youre getting there..keep it up

Benson - lol i like the intro, very creative...some technical flaws here thatll hold the track back in the voting, but this is still a good diss...you went personal and chewed him up...but yo, the dubs are kiilling me lol - they need turned down...i wouldve liked to hear more but you did your job

TRE - are you the same person rapping who opened the track? if you are, what happened...no offense but the quality fell off the table...you have two different vocal tracks going at once and its ruining the experience...second listen...swavys track comes to mind when im listening....good lines and concepts, but its too generic...you have flow and presence, youre just killing yourself with that quality/experimentation



with that said, my official vote wont come until i am able to finish listening...in the mean time, Just C is in the top spot...take it for what its worth
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go get a hug or somethin
New Music: http://soundcloud.com/freezyct

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