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Unread 05-08-2012, 11:38 AM
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Pretty nice, fam. One thing I noticed is that your flow gets a little choppy when you have to squeeze extra syllables in. Instead of forcing those out, become familiar with the concept of "triplets" and that should help you roll those fuckers out more smoothly. Aside from that, it's not bad at all.

7.5/10 - Good shit, but keep puttin' in that work!
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Pretty nice, fam. One thing I noticed is that your flow gets a little choppy when you have to squeeze extra syllables in. Instead of forcing those out, become familiar with the concept of "triplets" and that should help you roll those fuckers out more smoothly. Aside from that, it's not bad at all.

7.5/10 - Good shit, but keep puttin' in that work!
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