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Unread 04-13-2012, 11:15 PM
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Dope story. Like always, when i start, i finish so yea, read it all and the ending was unexpected but fits the story perfect. The Imagery was weird tbh for some reason I pictured parts of the story in the country side of a town. Vocabulary was decent and it flowed very well. Overall, 8/10 Good piece here.

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Dope story. Like always, when i start, i finish so yea, read it all and the ending was unexpected but fits the story perfect. The Imagery was weird tbh for some reason I pictured parts of the story in the country side of a town. Vocabulary was decent and it flowed very well. Overall, 8/10 Good piece here.

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