[IV]

Thanks for both submitting, going to keep this short.

Voting Rubix

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - V3numb - Flowed better.
Vocabulary - V3numb - More vocab used.
Topic/Meaning - FAME - Unpredictable approach, controversial yet creative.
Storytelling/Progression - FAME - Think it progressed faster.
Emotion - Tie - Not much emotion used in either.
Imagery - FAME - Could picture his verse a lot better.
Poetic Techniques - Tie - Neither really used any poetic techniques (repetition, alliteration etc)
Ending - FAME - I just liked the comedy of it.

Overall MVGT - FAME - Tbh a lot of people are put off topical battles because they're always so depressing and predictable and deep etc, I just think that FAME bought a new approach to topical battling. By having a rap battle with the guy in the picture is was completely unexpected and original and bought comedy to the topical arena. It's all about creativity and I think that FAME made this his battle. V you had good grammar and I liked where you were going with it, but I think some of you vocab was thrown in for a more 'complex' affect and didn't really fit with your verse, some of it didn't make too much sense and a couple of things made me think 'wtf' if you see what I mean? I know it was keystyled and thanks for submitting though. Both of you submitted last minute and I'm really grateful you made the effort.

[IV]

Thanks for both submitting, going to keep this short.

Voting Rubix

Rhyming Scheme/Flow - V3numb - Flowed better.
Vocabulary - V3numb - More vocab used.
Topic/Meaning - FAME - Unpredictable approach, controversial yet creative.
Storytelling/Progression - FAME - Think it progressed faster.
Emotion - Tie - Not much emotion used in either.
Imagery - FAME - Could picture his verse a lot better.
Poetic Techniques - Tie - Neither really used any poetic techniques (repetition, alliteration etc)
Ending - FAME - I just liked the comedy of it.

Overall MVGT - FAME - Tbh a lot of people are put off topical battles because they're always so depressing and predictable and deep etc, I just think that FAME bought a new approach to topical battling. By having a rap battle with the guy in the picture is was completely unexpected and original and bought comedy to the topical arena. It's all about creativity and I think that FAME made this his battle. V you had good grammar and I liked where you were going with it, but I think some of you vocab was thrown in for a more 'complex' affect and didn't really fit with your verse, some of it didn't make too much sense and a couple of things made me think 'wtf' if you see what I mean? I know it was keystyled and thanks for submitting though. Both of you submitted last minute and I'm really grateful you made the effort.