beat is hot,
overall mix is not good vocals is too loud
1st verse was monotone, sounded boring, you gotta put that passion into it, come wit that strong emotion n delivery. flow was ok some places was off. ya overdubs are too loud also and some are off u should just be barley able to tell they are there. keep workin yo you aint to far off.
2nd verse dude comes wit good emotion, flow was iight, i think the olny real bad part is the quality and the mix
just work on those things n this song has potential.
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