it's a fucking battle, not an essay. when i read battles, i want the punch and wordplay to come straight at me, and have that WOW!!!!! factor. i hate when im reading some battles and there's always that one guy that tries to fit in a gazillion concepts and wordplay into one bar. Reefer had that more entertaining and WHOA! bar. Phroxen, your nice and shit, but you gotta calm down and simplify your wordplay and concepts sometimes... know what i mean?
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