Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Skillz - Nice scheme and flow throughout, quite the generic topical rhyme scheme but worked very well with the tone of the piece. Unyce your scheme was okay but your structure made it really hard to follow.
Vocabulary - Skillz - Niether went that hard with vocab, in fact one of my pieces of advice would be to up your vocab game on both parts but skillz took it here.
Topic/Meaning - Skillz - I liked your whole approach. You both took it very much and face value but it fitted the topic. I don't think you tried that hard Unyqe but overall your meaning was fine. Skillz you killed it, good fucking job.
Storytelling/Progression - Skillz - you got this cat hands down, nearly got it mastered, your whole storytelling capability is dope, now you've got that i suggest you build upon it with out-of-the-box concepts and a wider range of vocab. Impressed.
Emotion - Skillz - Both were fairly emotional, but Skillz i honestly got really involved in your verse and felt the emotion in it. It was really sad, I kind of knew what was coming but I got quite wrapped up in it that I was hoping the end wouldn't be the way it was lol.
Imagery - Skillz - Due to your story telling approach, imagery here was clearer than Unyqes. The end I could picture very well in my head.
Poetic Techniques - Skillz - Both quite basic, but Skillz got it here. Techniques went perfect with the verse.
Ending - Skillz - I knew it would be a sad ending, sort of predictable but in a good way and you executed the idea perfectly. Unyqe your verse was too short for the ending to have any impact.
Overal MVGT - Intricate Skillz - I loved your whole verse, like I said previously you've mastered the storytelling technique. My advice to you is up your vocab game, and i'll give you some topics that allow you to think outside the box a bit more. From start to finish I was captivated in your piece, I felt the emotion and empathised with the characters you created. Unyqe; I don't think you tried at all, but well done for not no-showing. I know you're better than this and more effort would go down well, you have the fundamentals you need to now build upon that. Skillz, you're a big thread in the up-coming tournaments. Good job.