Truth is rule, you dont' text like me because you can't. It's not a "choice" thing, you can word it dope or not.
Lemme show you how it's done.
I'll re-work your lines that not only are the punches still there, they don't flow like shit.
then I'll fucking show you how you would have written my lines, all whack and shit.
Put some TRUTH IN THIS GODLY' SCRIPTURE...fucking faggot, you WAS NOT TALKIN VICIOUS, fore' you bit to go beastly like MOVIES WIT ZOMBIES IN EM/ bitch, I'm IN DAT TOP POSITION..funny how dudes be TALKING HOW HOT YOU SPITTING..when you just "dime a dozen" like votes for hot CYPHER'S that YA'LL HAVE WRITTEN
here's the way Rule would write my verse.
nobody thinks you're HOT AT ALL vs. simon you're BOUND TO FALL, like your MOTHERS DRAWERS, she was a "good buy" like she told me AU REVOUIR!! at RAPPING YOUR NOT THE BOSS, dem PANTIES I HAD THEM OFF after WE STARTED GETTING ON, and she got SMASHED LIKE A MAZEL TOV/ any win means YOU WOULD JUST BE CHEATING...you would get some dick hogs to 'sist ya, I'll still throw my "pearls before swine" like MARDI GRAS POLICEMEN!!
Not only does mine not actually flow, it's much more succint. I could go to your style, but it sucks. 'course Rule could never get that original.
when I flow, I spit a punch, then get right on to the next one. quick succession. Rule just has a forced buildup to punch.
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Yes Yes Ya'll, an it don't stop....
Seems like me an' you bout had enough,
Cause man, it's tough to keep the fam in touch,
And to add it up, this rappin stuff got me flippin out like a blackjack bust
Don't give a fuck if you sound like Master P, Mobb Deep or Remy Martin,
Cuz even if the next to try us is the best of rhymers?
Still get bodied on plates like Jeffery Dahmer
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