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**Godbody** · #3 02-06-2012, 08:26 PM

I agree with pauses and whatnot..maybe filling 30 out of 32..or 29..or 28, 26 lines even..

but your verse had hella filler. It's not hate when people vote against you because they felt the other dude won, and you felt that

YOU
ARE
MY
BITCH

deserves 4 seperate lines for 4 words..when each of those lines could've been more content with punchlines instead of filler.

**Godbody** · 02-06-2012, 08:26 PM

I agree with pauses and whatnot..maybe filling 30 out of 32..or 29..or 28, 26 lines even..

but your verse had hella filler. It's not hate when people vote against you because they felt the other dude won, and you felt that

YOU
ARE
MY
BITCH

deserves 4 seperate lines for 4 words..when each of those lines could've been more content with punchlines instead of filler.

02-06-2012, 08:26 PM	#3
Godbody <Legion of Doom> Summer Champion Discord Battler Ranked Audio Record 57 Won / 5 Lost Ranked Text Record 22 Won / 5 Lost Join Date: Aug 2010 Voted: 111 audio / 86 text Posts: 6,807 Mentioned: 867 Post(s) Tagged: 14 Thread(s)	I agree with pauses and whatnot..maybe filling 30 out of 32..or 29..or 28, 26 lines even.. but your verse had hella filler. It's not hate when people vote against you because they felt the other dude won, and you felt that YOU ARE MY BITCH deserves 4 seperate lines for 4 words..when each of those lines could've been more content with punchlines instead of filler.
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