I liked this, I think some of the elongation in the phrasing during parts of this didn't match the beat particularly well, maybe because they seemed a bit too drawn out, but this was definitely a nice story, and the presence was on point through out as well, an emotional delivery which felt spot on. And the fourth bar, maybe seemed a little stretched. But that's being picky. Lol.

I liked this, I think some of the elongation in the phrasing during parts of this didn't match the beat particularly well, maybe because they seemed a bit too drawn out, but this was definitely a nice story, and the presence was on point through out as well, an emotional delivery which felt spot on. And the fourth bar, maybe seemed a little stretched. But that's being picky. Lol.