Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Dono - Both were clever & were strong w/ their flow. It was close, but Dono had a smoother read w/ a more complex rhyme scheme..
Vocabulary - Master-Mind - She excelled in this, she added complexity to her verse w/ her extremely vivid vocab. Dono didn't lack though.
Topic/Meaning - Tie - Both basically went the same direction
Storytelling/Progression - Master-Mind - She was more consistent, I felt as if Dono fell off a bit, but then got better, the progression was nice, but boring at some stages.
Emotion - Dono - This was close, Master-Mind had to force it alot though. (EDIT: IMO, in a different way then Verity described it, maybe the same, but I wasn't as much of a fan.) xD
Poetic Techniques - Tie - Both used a strong form of Metaphors, similes, etc. too close to decide.
Ending - Master-Mind - Dono didn't lack in the slightest, both were sick as fuck, but I think Master's ending was more witty and nicely played.
MVGT - Master-Mind
This battle fucking surprised me, both went in & both were dope as hell. It was close as hell. Master-Mind had a lot of clever moments mixed in w/ decent flow, but really good storytelling skills. Some point's of Dono's verse were lackluster, he excelled in his rhyme schemes & portrayed the emotion really well; but not enough to win.
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