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Originally Posted by ~Lizman~
Is It Because Of The Multies?
Because Then I Would Be A Legend Yay
Not Anywhere Near My Best But I'm Not Gonna Search Further
In this TOWN YOU GET CLAIMED LIKE ROUNDS IN SIM CITY In this 'CLOUD' HELL GET REIGNED/RAINED Cause 'MOUNT' I've BEEN BUSY(!), Cause Your Bitch Is Like A Guitar, That "Chick" Gets FINGERED AND "PLUCKED", Cause This STRUMPET/STRUM PAD WAS BOUND TO BE "PLAYED" by the SOUNDS Of "THIN LIZZY"
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No, it's because of the multies, punchlines, delivery, creativity, flow, swagger, metaphors and set ups. Vocab was also on point. Your multies are tight, but you need to work harder at punches and creativity.
Just saying.