The arrangement is this / punches fly bye / breaking ya ribs / Amazingly quick / then I'll / Bear Hug you / Turn you to a human flannel, your blood drains in a drip / Then I might just Send u to a vacant abyss / 20,000 leagues under the sea taking a dip / All aboard Sound Cloud no wave n a zip / Beleive The truths the bass boost to make you shake in ya whip / As I brainstorm ya turf Invading ya strip / In this the Battle for L.B no Alien Flick /
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they say that every rhyme be a DIME like a room full of PRETTY WOMEN (a fly chick is considered a dime..a dime rate)~im a end your RUN SON no DIGGY SIMMONS (tourney run..and Run from run-d.m.c has a son that raps named diggy simmons)/all i need is one verse ONE TRY~to have your whole family MOURNING/MORNING by SUN RISE (showing grief..the rise of the sun)/you dont believe me that im NICE wit the PEN~i'll just let ya' HOE TELL/HOTEL like HOLIDAY INN (let her inform you..holiday inn is a hotel resort)/how ya' boy GET it in SON~give me the EVIL EYE..i'll let the EAGLE FLY..AIR FORCE ONE (desert eagle weapon..the presidents plane has the presidential seal on it which is a bald eagle)/
Sixx why you feel the need to explain every elementary wordplay, I don't know.
"i'll just let ya' HOE TELL/HOTEL like HOLIDAY INN (let her inform you..holiday inn is a hotel resort)"
HOE TELL / HOTEL W/P?...With an Expo?....really?
"all i need is one verse ONE TRY~to have your whole family MOURNING/MORNING by SUN RISE (showing grief..the rise of the sun)/"
Again another basic boardering on cheesy W/P with a lengthy expo
MOURNING/MORNING WP? ...This isn't 1995 lol.
You see the difference between that "under the sea" shit u quoted and I put in green. and you're bars is..Mine is all part of a big related rhyme scheme.
Where as your's is a bunch of un connected cheesy wordplay 1 liners. lol. No offence. just keeping it 100
Oh and for the record. Those bars wernet even for Ticket. they we're from another site batttle which never happened. I only wrote like 6 bars for ticket. the rest was totally unrelated un released battle bars.
Last edited by Just C; 10-17-2011 at 05:13 PM.
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