Now, since I have received so much grief for my wordplay being "Forced" I would like to compare one of what I'm sure several people would consider one of the top wordplay users in grindtime's wordplay to an instance of wordplay of my own.

QP vs. Swave Sevah: "Your battle raps are cadillacs. I see your link, and navigate away."(Lincoln Navigate.)

Bl[ ]nk vs. Erupt Dah Monster: "When the money's up? He's not Apparent With Cash just because this Person A Child."(A Parent/Purse And A Child.)

So, someone explain to me the difference between these two instances of wordplay? What makes my wordplay forced as compared to QP's? Why is QP's wordplay likely praised, while mine is critiqued as "Forced." Or told that it doesn't work?

Now, since I have received so much grief for my wordplay being "Forced" I would like to compare one of what I'm sure several people would consider one of the top wordplay users in grindtime's wordplay to an instance of wordplay of my own.

QP vs. Swave Sevah: "Your battle raps are cadillacs. I see your link, and navigate away."(Lincoln Navigate.)

Bl[ ]nk vs. Erupt Dah Monster: "When the money's up? He's not Apparent With Cash just because this Person A Child."(A Parent/Purse And A Child.)

So, someone explain to me the difference between these two instances of wordplay? What makes my wordplay forced as compared to QP's? Why is QP's wordplay likely praised, while mine is critiqued as "Forced." Or told that it doesn't work?