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#2 09-16-2011, 04:44 AM

A slight improvement from the others, but I feel that the topic has little to do with the piece. You had a lot of irrelevent rhyming and off topic spitting, and it never had much to do with 'creatures'. You're wording is still a little off, but being from another country it's expected. Keep improving and keep dropping.

09-16-2011, 04:44 AM

A slight improvement from the others, but I feel that the topic has little to do with the piece. You had a lot of irrelevent rhyming and off topic spitting, and it never had much to do with 'creatures'. You're wording is still a little off, but being from another country it's expected. Keep improving and keep dropping.

09-16-2011, 04:44 AM	#2
UnEtHıCaL Guest Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: n/a Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s)	A slight improvement from the others, but I feel that the topic has little to do with the piece. You had a lot of irrelevent rhyming and off topic spitting, and it never had much to do with 'creatures'. You're wording is still a little off, but being from another country it's expected. Keep improving and keep dropping.