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**MAN DOWN** · #3 06-16-2011, 06:28 PM

Before I read this, I think you're missing the point. Your style is fine, it's just sometimes it sounds like broken English, not slang, but they way you tie your rhyming words.

**MAN DOWN** · 06-16-2011, 06:28 PM

Before I read this, I think you're missing the point. Your style is fine, it's just sometimes it sounds like broken English, not slang, but they way you tie your rhyming words.

06-16-2011, 06:28 PM	#3
MAN DOWN <TOP SHOTTAS> Rookie Champion Tag Team Champion Ranked Audio Record 8 Won / 2 Lost Ranked Text Record 66 Won / 14 Lost Join Date: Mar 2011 Voted: 0 audio / 249 text Posts: 1,507 Mentioned: 525 Post(s) Tagged: 20 Thread(s)	Before I read this, I think you're missing the point. Your style is fine, it's just sometimes it sounds like broken English, not slang, but they way you tie your rhyming words.
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