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**IAmFlow** · #1 05-15-2011, 04:21 PM

What am I missing? Like I see it, I just can pin point where to fix it. I need to perfect my verse more and many my execution smoother. justtttt ehhh

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=397640

I keep reading over my current one with may.. I know what im missing, i just can't fix it

**IAmFlow** · 05-15-2011, 04:21 PM

What am I missing? Like I see it, I just can pin point where to fix it. I need to perfect my verse more and many my execution smoother. justtttt ehhh

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=397640

I keep reading over my current one with may.. I know what im missing, i just can't fix it

05-15-2011, 04:21 PM	#1
IAmFlow <Classick At Rhymin> Ranked Audio Record 7 Won / 7 Lost Ranked Text Record 192 Won / 43 Lost Exclusive Text Record 10 Won / 2 Lost Join Date: Sep 2009 Voted: 166 audio / 1340 text Posts: 4,092 Mentioned: 62 Post(s) Tagged: 5 Thread(s)	Some Feedback. What am I missing? Like I see it, I just can pin point where to fix it. I need to perfect my verse more and many my execution smoother. justtttt ehhh http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=397640 I keep reading over my current one with may.. I know what im missing, i just can't fix it __________________
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