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see dis nigga aint even got no critique on me lol
ProntoBanks: judgin from Dummy Dope alone I'd conclude you definitely have a tendency to say random shit and ramble on, you kinda like a prepubescent poor man's version of Lil Wayne except with an annoying unmarketable voice......

You come up wit a lot of nice lines, but it's like a collage of incomplete thoughts. I'd like to see if you can hold a theme through a whole song or at least develop concepts that would enable a listener to follow your line of thought

But with that said......Waka Flaka has been successful doin what you're doin, so you still might have a chance to make it lil nigga


*about to go listen to Huey J
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Unread 03-11-2011, 07:06 AM   #31
 
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see dis nigga aint even got no critique on me lol
ProntoBanks: judgin from Dummy Dope alone I'd conclude you definitely have a tendency to say random shit and ramble on, you kinda like a prepubescent poor man's version of Lil Wayne except with an annoying unmarketable voice......

You come up wit a lot of nice lines, but it's like a collage of incomplete thoughts. I'd like to see if you can hold a theme through a whole song or at least develop concepts that would enable a listener to follow your line of thought

But with that said......Waka Flaka has been successful doin what you're doin, so you still might have a chance to make it lil nigga


*about to go listen to Huey J
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