03-10-2011, 12:57 PM
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Originally Posted by Spooky Deep
Okay straight up, my take on......
1. FreezyCT: Not feelin your mixing......like stackin the voice and the adlibs
You gotta nice flow, but you could definitely put more thought into lyricism and relatin to the audience not just talkin about how you rhyme
We know you rap, why spend the whole verse tellin us how you rap?
2. dmullz: no hate, but man you need to switch ya style up......your words get jumbled and flow trails off so much
Need to work on breath control......
3. JusT C: sometimes it seems like you're ramblin, you got a nice delivery somewhat......maybe you can enunciate better (no it's not the accent)
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Good lookin Spooky
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