I know you rushed the 8. It's good, but I've seen some better concepts from you. There's some good lines. Not many personals, besides the whole vet thing. I know it's hard to play on their level, especially when they dip and then come back. That Cigarette Truck line was funny. This would kill someone on the mid-level, but when you step to vets like KK, you gotta have some ammo, nah mean? Flex ya flow to put some personals and you be good.
You know I'm good with you A-thom, but you could tell you was eager to get something together.
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