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Work on developing creative concepts, add in some wordplay, and more than 3 syllable multies.




You do need a LOT of work to be a top textcee on here though.

BOOK is right.. get some concepts, create some original punchlines, fix the structure a little and keep the flow u have cause its good, or make it better.. good luck King..
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Work on developing creative concepts, add in some wordplay, and more than 3 syllable multies.




You do need a LOT of work to be a top textcee on here though.

BOOK is right.. get some concepts, create some original punchlines, fix the structure a little and keep the flow u have cause its good, or make it better.. good luck King..
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