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Unread 09-25-2010, 09:14 PM
John Dos
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this shit is pretty nice. hook is ok, you had some good lines, nice multis, decent flow. it was aight.
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Unread 09-25-2010, 09:14 PM   #1
 
John Dos
Estimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.35/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.9/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.9/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.9/10 stars
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this shit is pretty nice. hook is ok, you had some good lines, nice multis, decent flow. it was aight.
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