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Unread 08-10-2010, 11:07 AM
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First punch, not cleanly cut enough basic yes, but I wanted to see you try it basic, but it's not as cleanly set up. You want a set up, then the delivering multie, don't but them together in one multie like "TRIPPING OVER HIS SHOE LACES", do it more "He's "tripping" like his SHOE LACES UNTIED" or something, you get me?
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First punch, not cleanly cut enough basic yes, but I wanted to see you try it basic, but it's not as cleanly set up. You want a set up, then the delivering multie, don't but them together in one multie like "TRIPPING OVER HIS SHOE LACES", do it more "He's "tripping" like his SHOE LACES UNTIED" or something, you get me?
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