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Originally Posted by CoRe sOuL
^Instead of that.....I'd try something like
Imma 'peel ya top off' like a CAN THAT’S OPENIN, only ‘vest’ you got is for FLOATIN IN OCEANS!! I’m FLOWIN ITS POTENT, I create havoc, I’m 'above PANDEMONIUM'......Now add a serious punch here)
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hmmmm i just want to clarify that i don't think can that's openin and floatin in oceans rhymes...but i see what you're saying still applies, its just kinda like eliminating more words right?